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Review of Eva Glyn’s The Collaborator’s Daughter.

My writing buddy, Eva Glyn, who also writes as Jane Cable, has a wonderful new book coming soon. The Collaborator’s Daughter is a dual-timeline novel set in Dubrovnik. Eva will be stopping by my blog on May 5th to talk about the setting of the novel, but as I have recently finished reading an advance copy of this book, I couldn’t wait to share my review.

The blurb:

In 1944 in war-torn Dubrovnik, Branko Milisic holds his newborn daughter Safranka and wishes her a better future. But while the Nazis are finally retreating, the arrival of the partisans brings new dangers for Branko, his wife Dragica and their new baby…

As older sister to two half-siblings, Fran has always known she has to fit in. But now, for the first time in her life, Fran is facing questions about who she is and where she comes from.

All Fran knows about her real father is that he was a hero, and her mother had to flee Dubrovnik after the war. But when she travels to the city of her birth to uncover the truth, she is devastated to discover her father was executed by the partisans in 1944, accused of being a collaborator. But the past isn’t always what it seems…

Published by One More Chapter.

My review:

There is much to like about this well-researched, dual-timeline novel. Set largely in Dubrovnik in 1944 and 2010, the story follows sexagenarian Safranka, who seeks to discover the truth about her father’s life and the circumstances of his death. Fran is a likeable character, she is quick to jump to conclusions at times,  but I enjoyed her journey of discovery (in more ways than one). The people she encounters in Dubrovnik are mostly welcoming; I particularly liked Jadran, who plays a significant role in her search.

The author’s depiction of the setting transported me to Dubrovnik in both time and place. I was drawn into the story, reading it over a weekend as I willed Fran to find and recognise the truth she was searching for. Based on real events, the impact of war is shown through the far-reaching consequences for all of those touched by it; because of this, it is an emotional read.

Preorder The Collaborator’s Daughter here.

(US cover)

You’ll notice I have shared both the UK and US covers. As I read, my kindle showed the US cover, it is my favourite as a result. Which do you prefer? Either way, you can enjoy the same great story within the cover.


About the author:

Eva Glyn writes emotional women’s fiction inspired by beautiful places and the secrets they hide. She loves to travel but finds inspiration can strike just as well at home as abroad. Her books are published by One More Chapter, an imprint of Harper Collins.

Although she considers herself Welsh, Eva lives in Cornwall with her husband of twenty-six years. She also writes romance with a twist of mystery as Jane Cable.

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Location, Location, Location with Francesca Capaldi.

Having lived in Littlehampton my whole life, I remember the Beach Hotel that once stood on the green at the seafront, and so I was intrigued to hear a radio interview in which Francesca Capaldi spoke about her historical novel, A New Start at the Beach Hotel, set in Littlehampton. Curious to know more, I invited Francesca to come on my blog and share the inspiration behind the setting of her latest novel.
Over to you, Francesca …

Thank you for inviting me, Carol. When I start a book, the idea begins with a certain character and something that has happened to them. But with A New Start at the Beach Hotel, set in 1914/15, the idea grew out of the setting.

I was coming to the end of the Wartime in the Valleys series and was keen to set the next one in Littlehampton in Sussex, where I grew up. I recalled the impressive-looking hotel on the common leading up to the beach, which had always fascinated me as a child and teenager, and it seemed the perfect setting. Luckily, my publisher, Hera Books, thought so too!

The Beach Hotel in the 1960s.

I’d never been inside the Beach Hotel and, sadly, it was pulled down in 1994; a crescent of flats was built in its place. All I had was several photographs of the outside, including some taken in the Edwardian era and one taken by my father, plus a list of staff in the 1911 census. In a way, that was better, as I was able to set it out inside in the way I wanted it, the dining room, conservatory, ballroom and so on, along with the staff quarters.

A New Start at the Beach Hotel doesn’t only take place in the hotel, of course, but in other parts of Littlehampton too. Edie, Charlie and Lili often go for walks by the beach and River Arun. Photos reveal many more activities on the beach and promenade than you’d find today. And the bandstand has gone. The tiny pier is the same, but the buildings near it, a Kursaal (later Casino Theatre), a windmill, tearoom and coast guards’ cottages, were pulled down in the early 1930s to make way for a Butlins indoor funfair. It’s now an outside amusement park. The path running past the river back in the 1910s was still level with the river’s shore, which was fully accessible, but that would be changed only a decade or so later. The warehouses, along both sides of the river in Edie’s time, are all long gone, though I do recall a few from my childhood.

The Littlehampton riverside in the early 1960s.

The characters sometimes have afternoon tea at the Harbour Tea Rooms. This did exist, sitting among the row of fisherman’s cottages next to the riverside on Pier Road, which was filled with fishermen, nets and boats. Fifteen-odd years later, that row was completely rebuilt, and many of the buildings became cafés. My father’s café was in the approximate location of the Harbour Tea Rooms, which I felt rather chuffed about when I realised.

Many parts of the town today would be instantly recognisable by somebody from 1914. The houses in the area behind the beach (what was known back then as Beach Town) are nearly all still there. The shopping streets retain many of the same buildings. The railway station, however, has been rebuilt twice since Edie’s day, whilst the Electric Picture Palace opposite (later the Regent), where she goes to see films, was pulled down in the early 1960s. I can just remember it.

Panorama of Littlehampton river and beach, taken from West Beach.

It has certainly been interesting, setting my new book in a place that is familiar, and yet at the same time, very unfamiliar. I’ve already written the second book,  All Change at the Beach Hotel, and started the third, so look forward to getting to know even more of old Littlehampton.

Thank you for that wonderful insight into the setting of your novel. I loved reading your post, Francesca. So many of the places you have spoken about are familiar to me, either from my childhood or from stories told to me by my parents and grandparents. I am looking forward to reading A New Start at the Beach Hotel. xx

About the Book

June 1914. Edie Moore is a Governess living in comfort at the grand Downland House in Sussex. But, wanting more from life, she flees in secret to Littlehampton, the place where she spent many idyllic childhood holidays.

Desperate for work, Edie begins working as a chambermaid at the prestigious Beach Hotel, even if the menial tasks are a far cry from her previous job.

Edie works hard and soon is in favour with Helen Probert, the manager’s wife, who sees that Edie is destined for bigger things.

But as she navigates her new life and finds friendship with fellow maid Lili Probert, she also grows closer to charming, cheerful porter, Charlie Cobbett.

However, what none of her new friends know is that Edie is hiding a secret from her past, one that would change the way they view her, forever. When the truth comes out, will Edie be able to keep her new life and remain in the place she loves so much?

Purchase  A New Start at the Beach Hotel here.

Other books by Francesca Capaldi:

World War 1 sagas set in the Rhymney Valley: Heartbreak in the Valleys (nominated for the Historical Romantic Award in the RoNAs 2021) | War in the ValleysHope in the ValleysTrouble in the Valleys

Murder Mystery set in the Farne Islands: Danger for Daisy


About the author:

Francesca Capaldi has enjoyed writing since she was a child, largely influenced by a Welsh mother who was good at improvised storytelling. She is a member of the Romantic Novelists’ Association and the Society of Women Writers and Journalists.

The first novel in the Wartime in the Valleys series, Heartbreak in the Valleys, was shortlisted for the Romantic Novelists’ Association Historical Award 2021. Both the Valleys series and her new Beach Hotel series are published by Hera Books.

Francesca was born and brought up on the Sussex coast but currently lives in Kent with her family and a cat called Lando Calrission.

Follow Francesca on social media here: WebsiteFacebookTwitterInstagram |Tiktok


#WritingWednesday with Chris Penhall: Writing Characters.

My #WritingWednesday guest this week is fellow Ruby Fiction author Chris Penhall, talking about the benefit of writing characters as if they are in a film.

Over to you, Chris …

One of the best tips I ever had was to think about your characters and scenes as if they were in a film.  It may seem obvious, but it was a game-changer for me. I’d written my first novel, The House That Alice Built, and had some good feedback for it, but it wasn’t quite there, so I invested in a mentor who helped me get it to the finish line (i.e., it won the Choc-Lit Search for a Star Competition and was actually published).

And that was one of the things she told me to do.

I honestly think I thought that’s what I was doing. But once I really started closing my eyes and began to think about what my characters actually were doing when they were talking or where they were sitting when they were thinking, what they could hear, see and even smell,  I realised I’d been paying lip-service to it as I typed away.  (I do love the sound of a tap tap on the keyboard, especially if it’s fast, so can get carried away with volume rather than quality…)

I love watching films as much as I love reading books, so once I began to really picture each scene in my head, I enjoyed the process of writing even more.

What could Alice Matthews see when she was driven along The Avenida on the Lisbon coast in Ignacio’s yellow Rolls Royce for the very first time? As a heads up, the section of the film The Yellow Rolls Royce starring Shirley MacLaine and Alain Delon on the Italian Riviera is one of my favourite pieces of cinema – oh, the romance, the colours, the feel of it …. Alice had come from a rather grey London, and what she saw from the window of that car was full of colour and vibrancy. What was it like sitting in Ignacio’s yellow Rolls Royce at the beginning of the sequel New Beginnings at the Little House in the Sun? Another spoiler alert – there were many balloons. Why were they there?  That was easy – but also, what did they look like, what did they do, what did the car look like as it drove away?

It’s very easy to slip into writing banter when characters are having a conversation, and I have to discipline myself to slow down and think about what people do when they are talking to each other – smile, take a sip of a drink, glance out of a window – and, although I may not use all of that on the actual page, the fact I’m thinking of it as a film or television scene allows me to see it in 3D and somehow helps bring the characters to life in my mind.

Now I’m working on my sixth novel, I have already closed my eyes and plonked my main characters in the area where most of the action is set. I can see them walking around, exploring their new surroundings, having conversations and gazing out to sea (my characters always gaze somewhere…) I am seeing them in 3D, and that is what helps me to write. Even though I haven’t put any words on paper yet – my hands are poised above the keyboard so I can start next week – I am ready to move them around and start them on their new adventure.

Also – I’d love my novels to be made into films. Any producers out there? Just thought I’d ask…

Definitely worth an ask 😉 Thank you for sharing another great writing tip, Chris. xx


Books by Chris Penhall:

The House That Alice Built

Home is where the heart is … Alice Dorothy Matthews is sensible. Whilst her best friend Kathy is living it up in Portugal and her insufferable ex Adam is travelling the world, Alice is working hard to pay for the beloved London house she has put her heart and soul into renovating. But then a postcard from Buenos Aires turns Alice’s life upside down. One very unsensible decision later and she is in Cascais, Portugal, and so begins her lesson in ‘going with the flow’; a lesson that sees her cat-sitting, paddle boarding, dancing on top of bars and rediscovering her artistic talents. But perhaps the most important part of the lesson for Alice is that you don’t always need a house to be at home.

Discover more or purchase here.

New Beginnings at the Little House in the Sun

Follow your yellow brick road …. Alice Dorothy Matthews is on the road to paradise! She’s sold her house in London, got rid of her nasty ex and arranged her move to Portugal where friendship and romance awaits. All that’s left to do is find a place to call home. But Alice’s dreams are called into question when complications with friends, work and new relationships make her Portuguese paradise feel far too much like reality. Will Alice’s dream of a new home in the sun come true?

Discover more or purchase here.

Finding Summer Happiness

You won’t find happiness without breaking a few eggs …Miriam Ryan was the MD of a successful events and catering company, but these days even the thought of chopping an onion sends her stress levels sky rocketing. A retreat to the Welsh village of her childhood holidays seems to offer the escape she’s craving – just peace, quiet, no people, a generous supply of ready meals … did she mention no people? Enter a cheery pub landlord, a lovesick letting agent, a grumpy astronomer with a fridge raiding habit – not to mention a surprise supper club that requires the chopping of many onions – and Miriam realises her escape has turned into exactly what she was trying to get away from, but could that be just the thing she needs to allow a little bit of summer happiness into her life?

Discover more or purchase here.

The House on the Hill – A Summer in the Algarve

Layla is calm, in control and is definitely not about to lose her serenity for the man next door!
Surely it can’t be hard to stay peaceful at one of the oldest yoga and mindfulness retreats in the Algarve, surrounded by sea, sun and serenity? Mostly, owner Layla Garcia manages it – with the help of meditation and plenty of camomile tea, of coursekeeping her grandparents’ legacy alive is stressful, and Layla has become so shackled to the work that, for her, The House on the Hill is fast becoming ‘The Fortress on the Hill’.
Then writer Luke Mackie moves to the villa next door, bringing with him a healthy dose of chaos to disrupt Layla’s plans, plus a painful reminder of a time when she was less-than-serene. But could his influence be just what Layla needs to ‘dance like no-one’s watching’ and have the fun she’s been missing?

Discover more or purchase here.


About the author:

Chris Penhall won the 2019 Choc-Lit Search for a Star competition, sponsored by Your Cat Magazine, for her debut novel, The House That Alice Built. The sequel, New Beginnings at the Little House in the Sun was published in August 2020. They are both part of her Portuguese Paradise series of novels.

Her third novel, Finding Summer Happiness, is set in Pembrokeshire in South-West Wales and her fourth – The House on the Hill – A Summer in the Algarve, is another in her Portuguese Paradise series.

All are available in e-book, audio and paperback.

Chris is a writer and freelance radio producer for BBC Local Radio. She also has her own occasional podcast – The Talking to My Friends About Book Podcast in which she chats to her friends about books. Good title!

A lover of books, music and cats, she is also an enthusiastic salsa dancer, a keen cook, and loves to travel. She is never happier than when she is gazing at the sea.

You can find out more about Chris and her work here: Website | Twitter | Instagram | Facebook