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Meet Three Characters from New Beginnings at Lullbury Bay.

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Today, I am excited to welcome a first-time guest to my blog, Georgia Hill, to introduce three characters from her latest novel, New Beginnings at Lullbury Bay. Over to you, Georgia …

Thank you so much, Carol, for having me on!

My new contemporary romance, New Beginnings at Lullbury Bay, has just come out. I really loved writing it as there are some fun characters. Here’s my quick introduction to three of them. They all work in Va Va Bloom, the florist’s shop, which is at the heart of the book.

Meet Three Characters

Marion Crawford

Marion is the part-time assistant in the shop and is a monster. I had such fun writing her. She’s late forty-ish (never admits to her real age) and loves a spa, yoga with goats and a bargain designer dress. She’s always immaculately made up, is fond of a micro-bladed brow and doesn’t baulk at wearing stilettos for a job where she’s on her feet all day. She may be a monster, but she’s a magnificent one! She tolerates working in Va Va Bloom part-time as her children have mostly left home, and her husband works away. It means she can keep tabs on the town gossip, as she hates being the last to know what’s going on. Along with violently pink Moschino jumpsuits, gossip is her passion. Daisy, the owner of Va Va Bloom, puts up with her because, underneath all the caustic snobbery, lies a generous warm heart, a lonely soul and a genius for upselling!

Mia Lodell

Mia is a delight. She’s the possessor of fine intelligence and a fierce work ethic, and, along with jobs in a supermarket and at the local primary school, she squeezes in working at Va Va Bloom part-time. Now in her early twenties, she struggled at school, flunked her exams and is taking A Levels at evening class. She’s got her eye firmly fixed on university. As well as a passion for nineteenth century poetry, Mia’s the one who teaches the others all about the Victorian language of flowers. It’s a system of coded messages hidden in bouquets that any Victorian Miss would know. Want to declare your passion? Send red roses – but make sure the thorns are removed. Want to show disdain? A bouquet of yellow carnations will do the job nicely.

Daisy Wiscombe

Daisy is the owner of Va Va Bloom. Her father died when she was sixteen, just when she was at that crucial moment of choosing her academic future. To appease her grieving mum, she found herself becoming a science teacher. Several years in, Daisy realises two things: one, she’s a hopeless teacher and two, she’s desperate to do something else. In a huge, life-changing decision, she sets up Va Va Bloom. When the novel begins, she’s been running it for five years and is at that awkward stage of needing to expand the business but isn’t sure she has the finances. A workaholic, the early mornings and full-on Saturdays mean her love life is put on hold. And then, a handsome stranger pops into her shop. He’s wearing thigh-skimming chinos, has a head of luxurious wavy hair and a pair of dark eyes permanently on the brink of humour. Daisy’s rusty romantic muscles are twanged, and she’s instantly smitten. It’s just her luck, then, that he’s buying his girlfriend a bouquet of expensive flowers. Having had her heart broken, Daisy’s confidence in her sex appeal is low. What would a gorgeous man like Rick want with a scruffy Croc-wearing florist who frequently sports rose stalks in her messy hair?

About the book:

Va Va Bloom is the brand new florist shop in Lullbury Bay, run by the talented – and heartbroken – Daisy.
As soon as she set foot in Lullbury Bay, Daisy knew it would be the perfect place to heal from her past and rebuild her life. Working in her very own florist shop by the sea, life couldn’t be better.

Except… arranging beautiful flowers for the weddings of the seaside elite, including the coastal wedding of the year, she can’t help thinking about what could have been.

Then Rick comes into the shop one day, and she finds herself open to a new romance for the first time in ages. But as it turns out, he isn’t without his own baggage… Will love ever bloom again for Daisy?

New Beginnings at Lullbury Bay is out now! Click to find out more or purchase.

Thank you so much for your great post, Georgia. It has been lovely to have you and to meet Marion, Mia and Daisy. xx
About the author:

Georgia Hill writes warm-hearted and up-lifting contemporary and dual narrative romances about love, the power and joy in being an eccentric oldie and finding yourself and your community. There’s always a dog. It’s usually a naughty spaniel of which, unfortunately, she has had much experience. She lives near the sea with her beloved dogs and husband (also beloved) and loves the books of Jane Austen, collecting elephants, and Strictly Come Dancing. She’s also a complete museum geek and finds inspiration for her books in the folklore and history of the many places in which she’s lived. She’s worked in the theatre, for a charity and as a teacher and educational consultant before finally acknowledging that making things up was what she really wanted to do. She’s been happily creating believable heroines, intriguing men, and page-turning stories ever since.

Discover more about Georgia and her novels here: X/Twitter | Facebook | Website

Meet Three Characters from The Secret Sister.

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It is always a pleasure to welcome Jan Baynham to my blog, but I am especially delighted today as I have recently finished reading her wonderful book, The Secret Sister, from which she is going to share three characters. 

Thank you, Carol, for inviting me onto your lovely blog to introduce three characters from The Secret Sister. Any author will tell you that by the time a novel is published, the characters in the story have become firm friends and we know everything there is to know about them.

Firstly, I’d like to introduce you to Sara Lewis; we meet her right at the beginning of the novel as she accompanies her little boy, Aled, to school on his first day. Her abusive husband, Fred, is away undergoing army training before being posted abroad for active service. They live with Fred’s mother at Graig Farm in the rural mid-Wales town of Pen Craig, and we very soon learn that she is unhappy living with her insufferable mother-in-law. Coming from an academic background, Sara is estranged from her own parents, having got herself pregnant at sixteen by a much older Fred. She was flattered that the local bad boy should have eyes for her and was taken in by his charms. She does have support from her elder sister, Menna, who offers her a lifeline in the form of working in the office of her building business, much to the disapproval of Fred’s mother. When news comes through that Fred has been killed in training, although sad for their little son, she is secretly relieved that she will never have to suffer any more abuse. A group of Italian Prisoners of War begin work on building an extension to the office where she works and there is an immediate attraction between her and one of the builders. Despite knowing that fraternisation between the prisoners and local women is forbidden, their love grows.

The prisoner she falls for is handsome Carlo Rosso from Porto Montebello in Sicily. As he writes to his mother when he first arrives at the prison camp, there are hints that Carlo carries a secret. He is one of several POWs who leave the camp each morning to work either on local farms or on building sites. Before being conscripted into the Sicilian army, he was a painter specialising in ecclesiastical art. Because of this, he is chosen to lead a team to transform an old Nissen hut within the grounds of the prison camp into a beautiful Italian Chapel where the prisoners may worship. There was no money allocated for the task, so it was down to the ingenuity and creativity of the prisoners to use found and natural materials to do this. As his and Sara’s relationship develops, they are both in danger for being found out. He stays in Pen Craig when the war ends and works for a local builder.

The final character I’d like to introduce you to is Claudia Rosso, the daughter of Sara and Carlo. She is very close to her father and has followed him into the world of art by studying painting. She is heartbroken when her beloved papà is critically injured in an accident at work. When she holds his hand as he takes his last breath, he whispers the name of Giulietta. Like her mother, she knows nothing about his life in Sicily but learns from Carlo’s friend that he had been wrongly accused of a wrongdoing and that is why he could never return to Sicily. Claudia travels to the island in search of the truth in order to try to find out who Giulietta is and to clear her father’s name. What she finds is a shock and she has to find ways of dealing with the discovery.

The characters were a joy to create, and I hope readers will enjoy their stories.

About the book:

The Secret Sister

Wales, 1943.

Sara Lewis should be heartbroken when her husband doesn’t return from war. But he was never the kind husband she hoped for. And now she’s stuck with her cruel mother-in-law on the family farm. Sara must do what is best for her young son. So she leaves the farm for the safety of her sister’s home.

Despite herself, she begins to notice Carlo, an Italian prisoner of war. Longing looks soon turn into love letters and a connection neither of them can sever.

But fraternisation between the prisoners and local women are forbidden. As their love grows, so does the danger all around them . . .

Twenty-five years later, their daughter holds her father’s hand as he takes his last breath and whispers a name: Giulietta.

But who is Giulietta, and who are the young woman and baby in an old photograph?

The secrets of the past collide as the family are shaken to their very core, forced to revisit memories they’d rather forget to uncover the truth.

Links to purchase: Amazon UK | Amazon.Com

My review:

In this wonderful novel, I was transported between two captivating timelines and immersed in the rich tapestry of Wales at the end of WWII and 1960s Sicily. The author’s skilful storytelling effortlessly evokes a brilliant sense of time and place, bringing the contrasting settings alive with vivid detail.

The narrative introduces us to Sara, trapped in an abusive marriage, and Carlo, an Italian prisoner of war whose forbidden love defies the odds in post-war Wales. Fast forward to 1968, and we follow Claudia, their daughter, as she unravels family secrets in Sicily, where she also meets the charming Alessandro.

Romantic, heart-wrenching, and heart-warming, “The Secret Sister” is a captivating tale of love, resilience, and the enduring bonds of family (I greatly enjoyed the bond between Sara and her sister, Menna). Baynham’s meticulous attention to setting enriches the narrative, bringing both Wales and Sicily to life in a way that resonates long after the final page is turned. I thoroughly enjoyed this novel from beginning to end.

About the author:

Originally from mid-Wales, Jan Baynham lives in Cardiff. After retiring from a career in teaching and advisory education, Jan joined a small writing group in a local library where she wrote her first piece of fiction. From then on, she was hooked! Her stories and flash fiction pieces have been longlisted and shortlisted in competitions and several appear in anthologies both online and in print. In October 2019, her first collection of stories was published by Black Pear Press. Fascinated by family secrets and ‘skeletons lurking in cupboards’, Jan writes dual narrative, dual timeline novels that explore how decisions and actions made by family members from one generation impact on the lives of the next. Setting and a sense of place play an important part in all of Jan’s stories and as well as her native mid-Wales, there is always a contrasting location. She is published Choc Lit, an imprint of Joffe Books.

Having joined the Romantic Novelists Association in 2016, she values the friendship and support from other members and regularly attends conferences, workshops, talks and get togethers. She is an active member of her local Chapter, Cariad.

Find out more about Jan Baynham and her novels here: Website/Blog | Twitter | Facebook | Instagram | Bookbub

Paws and Prose with Anni Rose.

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Today, I am very happy to welcome fellow Choc Lit (Joffe Books) author Anni Rose to my blog – especially as she is here to talk about her adorable dogs. Over to you, Anni …

Thank you for inviting me on to your blog today to talk about my pets and my writing. I know we both have a soft spot for Labradors. I had a yellow Lab, Henry, from the age of about eight and was delighted, more recently, when work commitments finally meant I could have another dog.

These days my constant writing companions are Brian, a Labrador with absolutely no brains at all. He sleeps on his back and usually with his tongue out! And likes to carry two balls or two sticks around. He hasn’t really got the idea of fetch or drop but will sit and stare at you happily with two balls in his mouth. Then we also have Rockstar, a Romanian street dog, who came to us after a major operation to put pins in both back legs. He’d been hit by a car and left on the side of the road for dead and was the inspiration behind Miss Phyllis in my fourth book, Recipe for Mr Ideal.

We’d never homed a rescue dog before and it was a very daunting prospect, we knew nothing of his history, only that he would need patience, time and a huge amount of love. I can still remember the day when this terrified creature turned up. Three years on, he has settled in beautifully, he still has a very odd gait – the pins are still in his leg, but these days he will happily jump in and out of the car or to catch treats. In fact, there is little he won’t do for cheese or bacon – a dog after my own heart!

He is, however, very much the boss in this house. A fascination with shoelaces, he can untie the trickiest knot and has his favourite chairs in the house – don’t try and sit one of them! If it ever comes down to a battle of wills, it’s best to give in gracefully, Rocky can be very stubborn, but he is immensely protective of Brian, and he has stripped the squeaker out of all Brian’s balls (for which we are very grateful!)

All my books have at least one animal; I feel they add more depth to the story. They are as important to me as my hero and heroine and always fun to write.

I like to be able to picture all my characters before I start writing a book, and the dogs, cats or horses are no exception. But, when I say that none of my human characters bear any relation to somebody, living or dead, the animals always do.

Charlie Brown in Recipe for Mr Super was really a Shetland Pony with a thing about Wellington boots and who upended me more times than I care to remember. Dragon was a beautiful horse with asymmetrical hips who needed constant vocal reassurance when faced with a jump. Elvis from Recipe for Mr Banksy was a tribute to our two previous black Labradors, who we lost during Covid before Rocky and Brian came along. Up and coming books have a Lurcher-Weimaraner cross called Fergus, who I met on a walk one day, and a Harlequin Great Dane called Colin. Then there’s also a book in the pipeline with more to come from Miss Phyllis.

I love having animals around me. They get me out for walks in the morning without complaining, whatever the weather, and are both great cuddlers. What’s more, they never complain when I read chapters to them over and over again. Who could ask for more?

Thank you for inviting me onto your blog Carol, and I look forward to reading more about Luna in your books to come. Anni x

You are very welcome, Anni. It was lovely to hear about your dogs. They are both gorgeous; Brian is, of course, Labradorable! Thank you for the great post. x

Anni Rose’s books are all available via Amazon.

About the author:

Born and raised in Berkshire, Anni Rose emigrated to Wiltshire six years ago, where she lives with her husband, sister, two dogs, a cat and Midge, the grey, speckled hen.

As a child, she could usually be found either reading or writing fiction, producing reams of stories over the years.

On leaving school, the need to earn a living sort of got in the way, and her writing was limited to financial reports or employees’ handbooks, but a local writing course and an encouraging group of writing friends re-ignited the fiction flame many years later, and Anni went on to have several short stories published in various magazines.

Anni would describe her writing these days as mainly modern romantic stories with a healthy dollop of humour thrown in. Away from writing, Anni can usually be found behind a camera, walking the dogs, enjoying one of her husband’s curries or one of her sister’s bakery treats.

Discover more about Anni Rose and her work here:  Website | X (Twitter) | Facebook

Writing Wednesday: Tips for Writing Love Scenes.

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As this Writing Wednesday falls on Valentine’s Day, I have joined forces with my fellow Choc Lit (Joffe Books) romance writers to share top tips for writing love scenes …

Carol Thomas (that’s me). I write feel-good contemporary romance and romantic comedy novels that will make you smile.

  • Having a strong emotional connection between characters, built in earlier chapters, adds to the moment.
  • Building physical tension through anticipation, subtle gestures, longing glances, and dialogue hints adds to the satisfaction of the love scene when it happens.
  • Physical intimacy needs to be consensual and driven by shared enthusiasm.
  • The love scene itself should involve a balance of passion, emotion, and sensuality, some of which will be played out before the audience, while some won’t.
  • I like leaving readers space for their imagination to take over; the things that fulfil the desires of my characters might be a turn-off to the reader, and I wouldn’t want to jolt them out of the moment.
  • Love scenes should never appear for the sake of being there, they should enhance character development and add to the story.

Discover more about me and my novels here.

Lucy Keeling is the author of fun, sexy stories with all of the happily ever afters.

  • If you’re writing your first ever steamy scene and it reads a bit like flat pack assembly instructions (insert part A into part B ), go back and remember to use all the senses.
  • This is an opportunity to show off a deeper understanding of your characters.
  • Oh, and keep an eye on the logistics.

Discover more about Lucy Keeling and her work here.

Ella Cook writes emotional, heartwarming romance that will lift your spirits:

  • I’m going to be controversial and say that, much as the best moments of intimacy in life aren’t planned, neither were the ones that got the best feedback from readers for me. I guess what I’m saying is let the characters go with the flow. If they’re the type of people – or at least one of them is – minded to privacy, then don’t feel like you have to fling the door open and show the ins and outs of their love life.
  • But equally, if your lead character is the type who thinks nothing of keeping her (admittedly rather more subtly shaped than most) vibrator in her bathroom, then she’s probably not going to shy away from talking about sex, either. So, if you want to write about it – write in line with our characters: get into their head spaces and let the reader see what they’re thinking, how they’re reacting and feeling.
  • Oh, and avoid biological terms – it’s a romance novel, not a biology textbook!

Discover more about Ella Cook and her work here.

Kirsty Ferry is the writer of spellbinding timeslips, unforgettable romantic comedies and uplifting contemporary romance novels.

  • I always leave the reader at the bedroom door. I’d never try to write a scene like that!
  • It’s nice to do an ‘almost kiss’ scene and have them get interrupted by a phone or something. I was told they’d kissed too early in my first book, so I usually try to hold off a bit for them.

Discover more about Kirsty Ferry and her work here.

Liv Thomas is one half of the writing duo who writes the utterly enchanting love stories set in Ireland by Isabella Connor.

  • It depends on the context and the relationship between the couple. If it’s a solid relationship, I tend to make it emotional as much, or more, than physical and let the reader feel a slow tempo.

Discover more about the work of Isabella Connor here.

Sue McDonagh writes uplifting, unputdownable romance novels:

  • Hilariously, the sex in my first novels had to be toned down as they were a bit too explicit. The pivotal sex scene in my last book was so toned down (less is more) that my poor editor wasn’t entirely sure whether they’d actually had sex or not, and I had to re-write it several times. I’ve learned that balance is the key.

Discover more about Sue McDonagh and her work here.

I hope you enjoyed our tips and they prove useful next time you write a love scene. Have a wonderful Valentine’s Day, and happy writing!
Carol x

Paws and Prose with Carol Thomas.

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As someone with a soft spot for Labradors, I am thrilled to be sharing a little about the special dogs in my life who have inspired the dogs in my novels.

Benson, my chocolate Labrador, was my constant companion and best (furry) friend for almost sixteen years. I could rely on him for a cuddle no matter what the ups and downs of life. He was the most loveable and loyal of dogs. When writing my first novel, Crazy Over You, I knew I wanted to weave him into the story.

After discovering her husband has had an affair, my protagonist, Abby, is at a crisis point in her relationship. She feels betrayed, confused and isolated. While her world is falling apart, her chocolate Labrador, Bramble (who shares many qualities with Benson), remains her constant support. He epitomizes the themes of love and loyalty and is the perfect companion for Abby.

Three years after getting Benson, we found him a friend, Milo. Milo was a slightly wonky-eyed boy with an independent spirit, a variety of quirks and a lot of love to give. He and Benson quickly became very close.

Milo inspired Jack, in my second novel, The Purrfect Pet Sitter. Jack is a similarly wonky-eyed black Lab, the beloved pet of Winnie, the first client to put their faith in Lisa Blake as she embarks on her new career.

One of my favourite scenes involving him is the opening chapter in which he has slipped his collar. In Lisa’s search for Jack, she has a chance encounter with a mysterious man in leather; Lisa finds him frustrating, whereas Jack seems to have him on side.

Another of my favourite scenes comes when Lisa and Winnie take Jack to church for a service in honour of St Francis of Assisi (patron saint of animals). Writing the scene in the church was a lot of fun. I don’t want to give anything away, but I will say that what Jack does to a Yorkshire terrier actually happened. Albeit, Benson was the one guilty of this misdemeanour in one of his early training classes, in which he, being a Labrador, was much larger than his smaller breed puppy pals.

Jack gets up to a few cheeky antics in the book. Some were inspired by my second black Lab, Hubble, who sadly passed away at a far too young age.

He was a bundle of energy and stars in adverts and the book trailer for The Purrfect Pet Sitter!

In my most recent novel, A Summer of Second Chances, Granger, the chocolate Labrador of the Bramlington family, comes from a long line of esteemed pedigree dogs. However, like his owner Henry (Lord Bramlington of Dapplebury), who finds living up to familial expectations difficult, Granger knows where his affections lie and forges a new path.

I love incorporating dogs into my stories; they add warmth and, being good judges of character, offer another perspective to the story.

After the sadness of losing Hubble, I was sure I wouldn’t have another dog. I had been blessed with three wonderful boys and knew I was lucky to have them. … that was until I saw Luna, a rescue dog needing a loving home. Luna had spent the first two years of her life in a barn, being used for breeding. She is our first female dog, our first rescue and our first yellow Labrador. She’s come a long way in the short time we have had her. She has learned to play with toys, accept treats, be walked, have cuddles, relax, trust, and snuggle up on the sofa. She is adorable, and it is a privilege to see her increasingly realise that life is full of love and fun. And the reason I am introducing her now? Well, I am sure she will appear in one of my books in the future.

Thank you for reading about my dogs. And if you enjoyed this post look out for others coming over future weeks as other writers share the animals that have inspired the paws in their prose.

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