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#WritingWednesday with Angela Barton: Plot Holes.

What is a Plot Hole?

When we’re editing our manuscripts, it’s so easy to focus on the little details that we want to improve, that we miss our story’s biggest weaknesses. The main oversight in editing is the dreaded plot hole.

A plot hole is an inconsistency or gap in the narrative of our story. It contradicts the flow of logic established in our story. Some examples:

  1. The personality of a character suddenly changes.
  2. A secondary character has an obstacle in their life, but it’s never concluded in your story.
  3. Your readers rarely forgive illogical events. For eg. A character travels to Spain from America and is drinking in a coffee bar later the same morning.
  4. One of your characters has forgotten an important fact that they knew earlier in the storyline.

How To Find and Correct a Plot Hole in Your Manuscript.

Readers’ suspension of disbelief may ensure that some of your story’s smaller plot holes are missed or ignored. But there’s a limit to how much they will accept. Here are some tips for finding your plot hole:

  1. Be objective when editing. The easiest way to do this is to step away from your manuscript and leave it for a few days, or longer. Review it later with fresh eyes.
  2. Refuse to be influenced by your own opinions and emotions. Edit from the perspective of your characters.
  3. Writing a continuity list can be helpful. I’ve made my own form which lists the chapter numbers along with a sentence or two about the storyline in that chapter and which characters are present. I also make a note of the month/year the scene takes place which also helps with continuity. (see photograph)
  4. Take time to question the logic of your plot. Does the previous storyline lead to that moment or has a journey or question gone unanswered? Have your characters made choices or said things that don’treflect their personality?
  5. Keep a checklist of your subplots and make sure all of them are complete. Close all open ends.
  6. Keep notes on your revised edits. They may open up a future plot hole that needs managing.
  7. I recommend a professional edit as a safety net to plot holes. If this is too pricey, ask a writer friend to have a read through.


About Angela Barton:

Angela was born in London and grew up in Nottingham. She is married with three grown up children and adorable six-year-old twin granddaughters. She is passionate about writing both contemporary and historical fiction and loves time spent researching for her novels. In 2018 Angela signed publishing contracts for three of her completed novels.

In addition to writing, Angela also relaxes by making landscapes using free motion sewing on a machine. She is a member of the Romantic Novelists’ Association and a reader for their New Writers’ Scheme. Angela is also a member of Nottingham Writers’ Studio, the Society of Authors and Ellipses and Ampersands’ fiction critique group.

Discover more about Angela Barton and her novels here: Twitter | Facebook | Blog | Amazon | Angela is also a member of Apricot Plots.

 

#WritingWednesday with Caroline James: Keep Writing.

Great advice from Caroline James on writing regularly and getting that first draft down:

Take a notebook, sit down and write in longhand for half an hour. Write anything that comes into your head. Let your stream of consciousness flow. Do this every morning for a week and see what happens. I promise; something will connect and your creativity will spark. In her book, The Artist’s Way, author Julia Cameron calls this, The Morning Pages, and many writers including myself, practice every day. Don’t forget that you have to write badly in order to get better and the more you write the more your writing will improve.

Stephen King, the famous author, who has sold millions of books, states that in order to write well you should read prolifically. He wrote a book for writers called, On Writing, and I highly recommend using some of his methods.

Begin a writing project and allow yourself time to write. Take time out of your day to sit down in a space that you can call your own, for however long you have. At the moment, we can’t take ourselves off to cafés or parks, so it is important to make it clear to your household members that this is your bit of ‘me time.’ If you write in challenging circumstances, you can write anywhere. Every day that you don’t write because you don’t know what to write or where to begin, is another day of not being a writer.

Don’t worry about grammar and spelling.

Just get it written. Get to the end of your first draft. The most important thing is to get your story on the page. You can check everything later. Don’t stop the flow by worrying over poor spelling or grammar. Once the first draft is in the bag then editing, re-editing and re-writing can be done.


Best-selling author Caroline James writes women’s fiction. 

Discover more about her novels or contact Caroline here: Website | Twitter | Facebook | Blog | Amazon


#WritingWednesday with Desiree Vilena: Writing Exercises.

5 Short Fiction Exercises to Rescue You from Writer’s Block by Desiree Vilena.

Writing short fiction is, without a doubt, one of my favorite pastimes. However, it’s so much more than that: I’ve found it’s also one of the best ways to sharpen my prose, hone my sense of narrative structure, and liberate my mind when I’m stuck on anotherpiece of writing.

Since I started writing short stories, they’ve become my go-to whenever I can’t seem to make progress on a longer project. Today I want to share some of the short fiction exercises that I use to “unstick” myself, in hopes that they might help you, too! These exercises work particularly well if you have established characters, but if you don’t — or if you need a break from your WIP — feel free to invent some on the spot, or borrow some from another author just for fun. Without further ado, here we go.

1. Write a few hundred words of dialogue:

Writing dialogue used to intimidate me hugely. Somehow I got it in my head that if I couldn’t say the words out loud without them sounding totally stilted, it was bad dialogue. This was before I figured out there’s a reason why I’m a writer, not an actor — and also that dialogue doesn’t need to be Sorkin-esque all the time! When embarking on a short piece in particular, you’re free to write total fluff without worrying too much about where it ends up.

This is why penning a bit of banter is now one of my favorite ways to conquer writer’s block. Most of the time, it’s a nice diversion more than anything: deciding what the characters should discuss, throwing in a few points of contention, and seeing where the conversation leads. But writing dialogue is also a fantastic way to get to know your characters — ideally, it makes you think more deeply about their personalities, opinions, and how they might express these things in dialogue, as well as what they might conceal (intentionally or not).

2. Write on a “question to fall in love”:

Remember the New York Times’ 36 questions to fall in love? Another short-form approach to solving writer’s block (that can also be quite conducive to character development!) is to write a short story based on one of these questions. My personal favorites include “Do you have a secret hunch about how you will die?” and “When did you last cry in front of another person?”, but there are plenty more lighthearted options to inspire you.

Again, it’s great if you can do this with your own characters, but sometimes a question will catch your eye and simply beg for an original story. You might write a flashback scene answering one of the “memory” or “childhood” questions, or a speculative story about the premise of #6 (“If you were able to live to the age of 90 and retain either the mind or body of a 30-year-old, which would you choose?”). If you’re in the mood to write creative nonfiction, you could even try answering one of the questions yourself! Though there are only 36 questions, the ways in which you might respond are endless — and of course, you can always combine this exercise with the dialogue exercise and have your characters answer the questions together (especially if you want them to fall in love).

3. Write a story based on a specific prompt:

Then again, sometimes you want a prompt that tells you exactly what to write. This may be the case if your writer’s block stems from toomuch freedom, rather than not enough. Indeed, this often happens to me when I want to start a new piece, but feel overwhelmed by possibilities. If this sounds like you, too, a prescriptive prompt is the way to go!

The only challenge is choosing the prompt in the first place. Luckily, it’s easy to narrow it down using a plot generator, or by organizing your writing prompts by genre! Still too much choice for you? Take a look at the most recent contest in the sidebar of that directory — this will give you a taster of just five prompts, each with a clear directive, such as “Write about a character putting something into a time capsule.” If you manage to finish your story by the end of the week, you can even submit it to possibly win the contest (a nice little bonus to this creative exercise).

4. Write a revealing dream sequence:

I know what you’re thinking: aren’t fictional dream sequences tough to pull off without lapsing into heavy-handedness? But as with all writing exercises, I’d posit that a dream sequence doesn’t need to be perfectly written — though it’s ideal if you can make it meaningful in some way.

I’ll usually turn to dreams when I’m stuck on character motivations and want to feel them out in an indirect manner. Writing a dream sequence can be almost like a Rorschach test: whatever I include in a dream illuminates what I might need to address more substantially in the text. Whether this is a fear the character needs to overcome, a solution to a problem they’ve been grappling with, or a romantic interest they haven’t yet admitted, such a sequence will almost always give me new material to work with — not to mention it’s another great way to connect with your characters in general!

5. Write a scene between secondary characters:

Romance writers will no doubt be familiar with this one, as it’s one of the best ways to lay the foundation for a sequel. But even outside of romance, I’ve found that taking a break from your main characters to flesh out the supporting cast (just like you’re taking a break from your novel with short fiction!) can be both refreshing andenlightening.

So here’s the final exercise: pick a couple of secondary characters (not necessarily your favorites — whomever you think might interact in an interesting manner!) and write about them. Once more, feel free to combine this with any of the above exercises, or just think about what these secondary characters might be doing while the protagonists are protagonist-ing and run with it.

This exercise is an especially helpful reminder that every character in a novel should be three-dimensional, even if they’re not central to the action! If you start writing a scene between secondary characters and realize you have no idea who they are or what purposes they serve, now is your chance to fix it before you publish your book.

Of course, short fiction exercises can’t remedy every problem you might have, particularly with something as expansive as writer’s block. But in my experience, there’s usually an exercise that will get to the heart of it — whether that’s character uncertainty, plot knots, or simply feeling overwhelmed with the task of writing. The trick is knowing yourself as an author, so you can pick the solution that will work for you.


Desiree Villena is a writer with Reedsy, a marketplace that connects authors and publishers with the world’s best editors, designers, and marketers. In her spare time, Desiree enjoys reading contemporary fiction, writing short stories, and making very slow progress on her novel.


Boomerville is Back! An interview with Caroline James.

I am very excited to see that Boomerville is back. Please tell us a little about your latest novel Boomerville at Ballymegille:

Boomerville at Ballymegille is a standalone read following the success of my novel, “The Best Boomerville Hotel.” Newly opened Boomerville Manor is a retreat for ‘guests of a certain age’ and an eclectic mix gather for the opening weekend to enjoy a celebratory party together with some interesting, off-the-wall courses.

It is set in Ireland, what drew you to this location?

I’ve spent some time in Southern Ireland and love the friendly people and their sense of humour and ‘craic.’ What’s not to love about the beautiful countryside, fabulous coast line, wonderful food and drink? It’s a perfect location for a story. Ballymegille is a fictitious village, south of Cork, close to a fishing port which was based on my memories of glorious Kinsale (pictured below), a town that is a must for any tourist visiting the area.

That looks great, I’ve been to Dublin but would love to explore more of Ireland. Hattie was a beloved character in your previous novels, does she, or any other returning characters make an appearance in this book?

Ah…. Hattie! Larger than life and full of fun, she is a character that haunts me. Yes, Hattie is along for the Irish ride, so to speak, and as ever, up to her usual mischief, causing mayhem wherever she goes. I sometimes think that Hattie should pop her clogs but that may upset too many fans of the character. Jo is back too, the owner of Boomerville, but there is a new guest list that includes Melissa, an ex-cabaret singer running from her abusive husband, and Bill, a bachelor bullied from beyond the grave by the ghostly voice of his mother. The Boomerville Babes are an ageing female aquatic team and if they were to ever set up classes near me, I would join them in a heartbeat. Great fun with plenty of female loyalty as the story unfolds.

I can’t resist a dog, and I’ve spotted one on your promotional posts, who is the four-legged star of this novel and how much was his character influenced by your gorgeous Fred Westie?

Great question. I can’t write a book without a woofer appearing in the story. The puppy in the promotional posts is Teddy, a dog that Hattie reluctantly adopts. His history is chequered but he endears himself to everyone. He is completely ficticious and nothing like the rascal that lives with me. Fred Westie, our three-year-old, who is a little devil and always in trouble, but I love the bones of him.

If you can say without revealing too much of the story, what was your favourite scene to write?

I always like the build-up to a tense scene. On the surface all is going well at Boomerville’s opening party but there is an underlying event, created by a despicable character, that changes the course of the book. I love taking the reader on a roller coaster of emotions and hope that this part of the story does exactly that, creating a page-turning experience right through to the end.

Finally, what can we expect from you next?

Boomerville is going Greek. I am taking Jo and Hattie to Bassaloniki, a fictitious island in the Ionian Sea, where they will open a temporary retreat for the summer months. With a new cast of guests and curious locals, I am loving the writing process and yearning to return to the beautiful islands, for further research, when it is safe to travel again.

Thanks so much for hosting me on your lovely blog Carol and happy reading everyone xx

You’re most welcome, thanks so much for stopping by. I can’t wait to read your fab new book!

Discover more about Boomerville at Ballymegille:

Here’s the blurb:

Join Hattie and Jo as they head to Southern Ireland to open Boomerville Manor, a holiday retreat for guests of ‘a certain age’. There’s Irish craic and shenanigans aplenty for the colourful cast of characters as everyone gathers for the grand opening.

Meet Melissa, an ex-cabaret singer running from her abusive husband, and Bill, a bachelor bullied from beyond the grave by the ghostly voice of his mother. Along with local bobby Harry the Helmet, ageing aquatic team the Boomerville Babes, eccentric artist Lucinda Gray, and heartthrob Finbar Murphy, they gather in Ireland and the fun begins. But murder is in the air and there’s mischief afoot. Will the residents get more than they bargained for at Boomerville?

Set in the beautiful Irish countryside, ‘Boomerville at Ballymegille’ is a heart-warming story of friendship, fears and new beginnings.

Click to buy: Boomerville at Ballymegille


About the author:

Best-selling author of women’s fiction, Caroline James has owned and run businesses encompassing all aspects of the hospitality industry, a subject that often features in her novels. She is based in the UK but has a great fondness for travel and escapes whenever she can. A public speaker, which includes talks and lectures on cruise ships world-wide, Caroline is also a consultant and food writer. She is a member of the Romantic Novelist’s Association, the Society of Women’s Writer’s & Journalists and the Society of Authors and writes articles and short stories, contributing to many publications. In her spare time, Caroline can be found walking up a mountain with Fred, her Westie, sipping raspberry gin and relaxing with her head in a book and hand in a box of chocolates.

Books by Caroline James: Hattie Goes to Hollywood | Boomerville at Balymegille | The Best Boomerville Hotel Coffee Tea the Gypsy & Me | Coffee Tea the Chef & Me | Coffee Tea the Caribbean & Me | Jungle Rock

Find out more about Caroline James and her novels here: Website | Twitter | Facebook | Blog | Amazon Author Page


Feel Good Friday with Chris Penhall.

Rounding off my Feel Good Friday posts, I am delighted to welcome Chris Penhall, as she shares an extract from her new novel New Beginnings at the Little House in the Sun.

Hello Christine, thank you so much for stopping by.

Thanks for allowing me to be part of your blog.

You’re very welcome, anytime. In light of the year we’ve all been experiencing, I am asking each of my guests to share a top tip to promote wellbeing.

Events in 2020 have certainly proved that looking after ourselves and taking care of our general wellbeing is hugely important when things around us seem overwhelming and out of our control.

My top tip to promote wellbeing is to do something that takes your mind away from the day to day routine. I am an enthusiastic salsa dancer and have recently taken up tap – when the music is playing, all I can think about is the melody and the beat, and the rest of the world disappears for a while. But it could be anything like that  – cooking, swimming, yoga, an uplifting film, or a long walk by the sea.  I do them all!

That’s great advice, and I love that you are doing salsa and tap! I know some exciting things have happened for you this year too, with the release of your latest novel. Please tell us a little about it.

New Beginnings in the Little House in the Sun is the sequel to my debut novel, The House That Alice Built. Set in Cascais near Lisbon in Portugal, it follows Alice after she has finally dealt with the issues she had with her bullying ex and her beloved house in London.  She heads back to Portugal full of plans for the future, but a few surprises along the way put her relationship, work, and the dream of owning a house in the sun into question. So, what does Alice do next?

I loved The House that Alice Built, it really transported me to Portugal at a time when I was in much need of a holiday, so I am looking forward to New Beginnings at the Little House in the Sun. And I am delighted to say, you are sharing an extract:

This is the day after Alice arrives in Portugal having left London for good, excited to view a new house.

As Alice walked out into the morning sun the following day, she rummaged in her bag and made sure she still had the house details. The trees dappled patterns on the grass and swayed gently in the spring breeze. Everything smelt fresh and floral and alive. Her mind fizzed with excitement as she hurried through the back streets of the old town to the square. The birds sang happily, and the white, purple and pink of the spring flowers burst from verges and window boxes.

She heard the clink of china from a kitchen window as cups and plates were moved, a family chattering noisily over breakfast, and then she skirted around a workman painting a wall a bright, luscious yellow. As she walked closer to town, the cobbled streets widened slightly and she could see more people moving around, beginning their day. She loved Cascais first thing in the morning, when the cafés were just setting up and the shops were about to open.

Oh my goodness, you have such a wonderful way of depicting a sense of place. I love it. And for readers wanting to join Alice in her escape to Portugal, here are those all important purchase links:  The House that Alice Built | New Beginnings at the Little House in the Sun

So where will you be taking us next? What are you currently working on?

I’m working on my third novel now, which is set in the UK this time. It’s about Miriam, a successful businesswoman who rents a house by the sea for a 6 month break away from everything. However, due to an administrative error, she finds that the solitude she is looking for is in short supply.

That sounds fun. Finally, before you go, I like to ask all of my guests five quick fire questions for fun:
Mountains or beach – Beach
Cinema or Netflix – Cinema
Trainers or heels – I wish I could say heels, but if I’m being honest, it’s trainers!
Favourite season – summer
Who would you give your last rolo to? – Keanu Reeves, of course. (Very good choice!)

Huge thanks for rounding off my Feel Good Friday posts with such a wonderful extract, Christine. And a very big thank you to all of the authors who have stopped by over the summer to share  their top tip for wellbeing and an extract from their novel. I really appreciate it! xx


About the author:

Chris Penhall won the 2019 Choc-Lit Search for a Star competition, sponsored by Your Cat Magazine, for her debut novel, The House That Alice Built. The sequel, New Beginnings at the Little House in the Sun is published on 25th August 2020.

Chris is an author and freelance radio producer for BBC Local Radio.

Born in Neath in South Wales, she has also lived in London and in Portugal, which is where her two novels are set. It was whilst living in Cascais near Lisbon that she began to dabble in writing fiction, but it was many years later that she was confident enough to start writing her first novel, and many years after that she finally finished it!

A lover of books, music and cats, she is also an enthusiastic salsa dancer, a keen cook, and loves to travel. She is never happier than when she is gazing at the sea.

You can find out more about Chris and her work here: Website | Twitter | Instagram | Facebook